Beautiful

Excuse me if I lose you

But you've got my mind in a whirl

You show that smile and I know

I wanna be your girl

I want you to see me

And feel the same

And I know if you ask

My whole life will change

Instead of feeling down

I and hiding my face when you're around

I will feel beautiful

For the first time in forever

I will feel truly happy

For the first time in never

And I know

That if you say I am

Then I'll believe you

But there is nothing I can do

So I'll keep feeling down

Keep seeing you around

Until you tell me

I am

Beautiful

Author's Note

Imagine this sung to a happy tune.

Reviews

[NomNom]

Tears are in my eyes...... 'sniff'

[Sunflower 20]

i really liked the way you wrapped it up with the title, very good job :)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Quite nice and cute and yet really sad and deep of emotion... really good write, i enjoyed it, really like it.

[李[A]]

This was pretty cute. What I liked about this poem was that it flowed especially well. A lot of poems I read always have this kind of forced flow whereas this feels very natural. I felt that the theme was pretty aboveboard in the method it was stated. Also, it's nice how you got up and personal using "I" rather than going from an abstract or passive voice perspective. Good job!

[sugar]

aww that was great!! thats how felt but he did say i was when i didnt exspect it