Swim team

Swim team

A Poem by Call Me Blu

The heat of the sun

The cold bite of the water

The rush of the strokes

The prick of the whistle

The feeling of knowing your first

The feeling that you belong

The friends

The fights

All right there

© 2011 Call Me Blu


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Call Me Blu
no grammar nazis please

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this makes me want to go out for swimming at my school. i really think you captured the appeal of the sport and it's hard for me to not want to go swimming right now haha. you did a really wonderful job.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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 Added on June 19, 2011
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