Pain(Continued from one of those days)

The gut wrenching feeling you get

When you relize no one is coming

No one is trying to find you

No one is going to try and comfort you

No one is going to catch you

No one cares

Reviews

[QC]

such sadness. i want to give you a happy moment, Blu.

Very good! I love the sincerity you put in your pieces, and I notice this often when you write. I love this piece especially because it is how many people feel, and you brought it to words but in a short to the point piece of writing.

[Shayne Winchester]

This poem, no matter if it is short, nearly brought tears to my eyes. I absolutely, truly admire the emotions in this poem. It is so profound, and it just takes my breath away to read this amazing writing. Keep on writing, Blue. :)

[Gone]

I have felt much the same over the years. I know the following is small comfort when you are at that point, but it is only an illusion. Usually such feelings come from putting a negative spin on aselect few moments and painting it like it is the whole story. I was the school football, the most rejected kid in school and yet even I had a select few real friends. Sometimes they didn't act like it but when push came to shove, they were there!

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

Aww Blu...... This makes me want to cry. Of course people care about you! why wouldn't they. You are smart, and funny, and a great person to be around. You are special! Just remember us grownups sometimes has brain farts that makes us look like we don't care when we really do. Friends are just weiros sometimes, they change their moods like we change clothes, often. Don't let it get you down