My phone

My phone

A Poem by Call Me Blu

I look at my phone

It's screen is dark

I carefully slide it

And I want to cry

No new messages

Ever

I'm not worth texting I guess

No one cares anymore

I'm just always there

Just in case

Well this time

It' my turn

Tomorrow I will not answer them

They say hi

I walk away

I need them to see

That I know what their doing

And I can do it to

© 2011 Call Me Blu


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Oh, I understand your predicament all too well Blu, I wasn't much of a texter until I actually did start messaging people and all. But just because they don't text you doesn't mean you play tit-for-tat. Make them know that you want to communicate with them and take the first step by texting them first. Cute poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Stephen's Rules number 199: "Always treat others the way you wish to be treated. Even though they dont treat you the same. Because if they can't see you are special then you didn't need them anyways, or maybe they just don't know how."
Remember one thing, Revenge is a dish thats best served cold, but its poison effects the givers heart.... This was an excellent poem and a marvellous display of your feelings and emotions! Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


you are a very talented writer.
great write

Posted 13 Years Ago


Good advice from chelsea. I'm lucky to get one text in a week! Even then it would only be my wife, daughter or son wanting something lol! good poem though.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ouch, this one hurt!
I know it feels pretty crappy when you check your inbox and things and nothing is in. But all of you other friends in boxes are swamped with messages. Kinda makes you feel bad about yourself.
But yeah one thing--- don't do back to others. It kind of is a slippery slope, I've learned that the hard way. So I guess if they say hi just say hi back!!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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