Just don't

Just don't

A Poem by Call Me Blu

Never make someone your everything

Because when they leave

You have nothing

Never tell someone you love only them

Because when they leave

You love nothing

Never say you will never leave

Because when you do

You have no where to go

 

© 2011 Call Me Blu


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this poem is fluent beautiful elegant an dture. relating is easy, as is sorrow and memories. i love it so much.
100/100

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is so truthful and wonderful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow this poem really hits home for me I recently was dumped and feel all these emotions you really emit real emotion and although its short and I do wish it was longer it really packs a strong punch very well done especially liked the last line never say you will never leave when you do you have nowhere to go

Posted 13 Years Ago



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