When it counts

When it counts

A Story by Call Me Blu

I looked itno your eyes, you stared back. A one way love coming only from me, i caress your cheek, run my hands down your perfect chest. I step back and look at you. I met you on my birthday, the best present ever. My Ken doll.

© 2011 Call Me Blu


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lol a Ken doll ok, that was nice. I thought it was going to be tragic because the love was one way but I see it had to be. Nicely done.

Posted 13 Years Ago
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Given the shortness, I think this wouldve done better as a poem. But I really REALLY liked this. And the idea of a boy as a birthday present. Mmmm. Lol. The depth this has is amazing.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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