Dead words

The words died with your breath

Floating into the night

I was to late

My word hurtled towards yours

But came snapping back empty

I sit here now

Sobbing into your blood

Creating the ink with which I write your final words

Reviews

[poems with feeling]

wow O.O great i love it

[QC]

sobbing into your blood....visuals. very sad ):

in other news, you seem to be allergic to the word ''too''. but very good poem (:

[SOUL LESS]

nice...sobbing into your blood.:(

[What happened to simple..]

ooh, this is short, sharp and catchy, sad though =) thanks