Falling Down

I'm falling down

                     down

                         down

 

Everything feels like its spinning out of control

When did I lose control of my life?

Was it when I stopped caring?

 

I want it all back

My happiness

My life

My soul

 

The high can't take me away anymore

Everythings clear now

Theres no escaping it

 

I'm trapped in a world I know nothing about

Im falling...

DOWN.

 

Reviews

[SariahM]

I love how you set up the poem its amazing. I can almost feel myself falling.

[ATG]

A very good poem. I really enjoyed how you wrote the poem. The lack of order that appears in how the poem is written was a nice touch and added to the sense of losing control.

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to stop the fall. Must find a place to gather thoughts and begin anew and flesh. Hard to do. In the end we do. I could feel the desire to know happiness and I like the many questions raised by this amazing poem. I like the set-up of this poem.
Coyote

[trippy kitty]

Pretty dramatic, I liked it though. And I could relate and all of that crap.