You.

You.

A Poem by tally up the points, were settling the score

You were my everything.
You were the only thing that made me happy
We were supposed to be together forever

But then you ruined it
You threw everything we had away
And now you are HER everything

It's like we never had what we had
It's like I'm a ghost now
And you hold my soul

I gave up everything for you
You broke me
But I still love you. 

YOU.

© 2012 tally up the points, were settling the score


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ATG
A very good poem about hearbreak. The poem was very well written and the word choice was great. The poem accurately protrays how it feels to love someone and hate them at the same time.

Posted 12 Years Ago


When the heart is loss. Easy to swim in sadness. I could feel the desire for the past and the knowledge of a goodbye in this poem. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is beautiful but heartbreaking from someone who have been in that place..

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful, heartfelt write.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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