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i wrote this for my love

i love you...

the moment you entered my life i wanted every bit of you

your gothic atire made me acctually nervouse for once in my life

i acctually found some one sexually atractive.... sure i mean crushes where always cute when i was yonger but you..... wow you are something all its own...

i love you..... with every last beat in my appethetic heart... you leave me speachless and unable to move without the feeling of lonliness.

i miss you.. i wish you where right next to me right now... you are my vampyric addiction and your lustfull eyes always leave me wanting so much more...

i need you if you where to leave i think i would die....

no...

i know i would die....

you , joey, are my life....

without you

my thousands of dreams would come to a seace and i should fall into a million peices

so in short you are my futur and my present..... i care not of my past .... but i care for you. and i shall forever and always

 

 

Reviews

[Jane]

I love the formatting here and how it is presented as a chain of thoughts instead of just a poem.
Lots of spelling mistakes, but the content is very good!

[Annebelle Ashire]

wow...

- I haven't seen my fiance in 6 months...he's finally coming home this weekend..

this was truly touching.