Love Hurts When You Slip

Love Hurts When You Slip

A Poem by Courtney Elizabeth

 My heart races,

as I write the message to him.

I'm not sure if you know,

I'm not trying to push you away.

I'm doing everything but that.

I'm holding on for dear life,

but it seems as if the string keeps slipping,

out of my grasp ever day we're apart.

I was trying to tell you,

you are my life.

I do love you.

I could literally feel my heart breaking,

tearing,

aching,

as I said those words to you.

I didn't want to. 

I wanted to keep holding on,

to just believe that we really are meant to be,

that you really are the only one for me.

I guess the string was just to slippery,

and I felt if I kept holding on,

then it would be even more painful,

to let go when that string finally slipped,

and you finally fell.

 

 

© 2009 Courtney Elizabeth


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Ah...I think I felt like this once.. not fun ..well expressed..the struggle , the passion and then you let go.. sometimes you will wonder why you held on at all..well done.

Posted 15 Years Ago


awwwwwww so touching im sorry i still love u!!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Courtney Elizabeth
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The names Courtney. I love writing. Its like my passion. Along with basketball. But my world is all about my best friends. Blake, your amazing. i love how your always here for me when im in a tough si.. more..

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