My Take on Romeo and Juliet's Love

My Take on Romeo and Juliet's Love

A Story by Nader!!
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I think that Juliet was Romeo's rebound and that he truly loved Roseline. I think the reason they thought they were so in love is because they were both so young and lonely. They didn't understand what was going on they couldn't have known anything they

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She walks into the room,

So cold and bitter,

She shrivels at the sight

Of blood and sweat

That lines the halls.

She walks through her emotions

Gathering the unity which binds her still,

She feels empty and lost

In this horror

Which is now her own.

She was a star gazer

No one could faze her.

Fell into a heart crush and couldn't get out.

Looking for her soul,

Looking for the outlet

To showcase her heartbreak.

He lies there dark.

As cold as his being.

Not showing his hurt.

He showed for her sorrow.

She awakened her hatred

For the thing she once never spoke.

She was one and alone.

She awakened inside her the hatred for hope.

She was never one to satisfy her goal.

And wish her aspirations.

She thought she coudn't be disappointed in her shining armor.

Break it down, Break it down

See the weakly interacting beyond the rock hard shining armor,

Finding true colors

Past the red and purple

To the black and magenta.

Awaken her hunger for kill.

He abused her past,

Dieing in her presence

As he lies there with the blade stuck in his pathetic heart.

She screams the hate and drives in more.

Screaming

DIE, DIE, DIE

So peaceful she seems to have this end.

Fill her once again

Fill her grieve

Her majestic state into which she once knew

Break down the armor.

Find out who your true Romeo is.

Poor Juliet didn't know

Romeo was lying with Rosaline.

Redemption!

Juliet will yet be redeemed!

She will not stand alone,

For she still has her blade.

She leaves the room

Even more cold and bitter now.

She is satisfied at the sight of the fresh blood and fear soaked into the sheets.

She has filled her hunger.

She might not have him anymore

She is satisfied that no one will either.

She lives her days end wandering

And keeping her foolish disguise.

Oh darling no one can see behind those unblended eyes

So fall for what you are

From whom you were.

Fall to the mercy of cupids arrow,

You are powerless to your "Almighty Love".

 

 

© 2008 Nader!!


Author's Note

Nader!!
We don't really know what Shakespeare was really trying to say about love when writing Romeo and Juliet. He could have meant the complete opposite of what we have believed for years. Keep your mind open, anything is possible.

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Added on November 22, 2008
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