megan

megan

A Poem by hinachan
"

its bout her

"

M-magnifecent

e-enegretic

g-glamrous

a-awesome

n-naughty

© 2008 hinachan


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Have you considered doing more detailed acrostics? You have the beginnings of one here. Ask yourself , why is the person this? If she is magnificent what makes her that? Maybe she is:

"Magnificent in all she does"
"Energetically moving from place to place"
g-glamrous...
a-awesome...
n-naughty...

You see what I mean? Add a little more detail to give it substance and power. You have a good start. And remember to use spell check.


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hinachan
hinachan

lexington, KY



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