Disarray Feelings

The water is still
The steady beat broke by ripples
Disarray feelings.

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[iveltac]

Review for Disarray feelings

It is very short. I don’t think there were any mistakes in it. I don’t know much about poems but isn’t there supposed to be a period at the end. It was very short but I still liked it though.

It made me image myself at the beach sticking my toes in the water:p. Keep up the good work.