Passion

          A thousand thoughts going in and out of one's mind.

        Not a moment goes by that they stop to say hi.

        As soon as the inconceivably passionate eyes are gone from sight, all thoughts stop to say hi.

        It is only those profound brown eyes that can keep the various thoughts from saying hi.

        Not even the clouds in the sky or the man in the moon can do such things.

        And when tears befall the rosy red cheeks only the soft, warm comfort of your hands and the luscious, warm touch of your lips as they touch mine for a gentle kiss can cure the agony of the world as it makes the narrow pathway I walk upon tumble away.

Reviews

[GTVile]

Aw, that's very sweet and gentle. The straightforward nature of it gives the reader a good insight into your temperment and your personality. Its good that you can vividly describe things exactly how you see them and not try to arbitrarily dress them up in fancy words so that people will think you're a weirdo. Very good.

[Steve]

I like this! Nicely done. Very original and imaginative.

[solo2be]

the flow and the imagery in this piece are great. It is amazing how someone can make your whole outlook on things diffrent

[Tony]

The impact of a special person in our lives-- can be pretty incredible. Very passionate words here.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

The words in this poem seeped passion, it flowed smoothly! Great job!

[Lola Nation]

well, hell they should learn more than to say hi.

[Tony]

This is very nice, Kindra.
And I'm not saying that just because I am your uncle.
This line I liked in particular:
'As soon as the inconceivably passionate eyes are gone from sight, all thoughts stop to say hi.'

[cest la vie]

The look and touch of another can stop the tears and warm our hearts, No?
Nicely done and thank you for sharing this poem.:-)

[nostal]

Wow, there's something deeply poetic about this.
Don;t really know.
Good job.