Passion

          A thousand thoughts going in and out of one's mind.

        Not a moment goes by that they stop to say hi.

        As soon as the inconceivably passionate eyes are gone from sight, all thoughts stop to say hi.

        It is only those profound brown eyes that can keep the various thoughts from saying hi.

        Not even the clouds in the sky or the man in the moon can do such things.

        And when tears befall the rosy red cheeks only the soft, warm comfort of your hands and the luscious, warm touch of your lips as they touch mine for a gentle kiss can cure the agony of the world as it makes the narrow pathway I walk upon tumble away.

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Passionate...I felt the sentiments in your write...the yearning in its dream state. Nicely done.

[Cameron]

Wow very beautifully written, and it brings back a few memories. Well done if I do say so myself.

[Distant horizons]

Beautifully written.

[Andrea]

I loved this. it is very powerful.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

This is so beautiful , tender and loving write :)

[sts.]

You have a unique style. Looking forward to reading more.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I like the set-up and the strong ending to this amazing poem. Passion allow us to know peace and joy for a moment. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Really nice writing.. I like your whole wording. Keep it up! Do u read mine to Anguish...

[Kyle]

I just read this one again. Very sweet. I love it.

[Kyle]

This is beautiful. I love the accompaning picture and the words seem to connect together in the write nicely.