What you do to me.

 

There you sit
smiling
And it's you I watch
wanting
But you don't even know
What it is you do to me
So I keep on watching
and wanting
as I bleed

Every time I look at you
Every time I talk to you
Every time I smell you
My heart continues
melting
And I am forever
dreaming

Whenever you pass me by
Whenever you catch my eye
I feel like I want to cry
Because of what it is you do to me

Your eyes
gleaming
And your lips
pleading
And your hands
exploring
While my heart remains
bleeding

Every time you look at me
I wonder what it is you see
Every time you talk to me
And I hear that beautiful voice
My knees get weak
My stomach flutters
My chest collapses
My neck hairs tingle
And I stop breathing
Just in that moment in time
When you do what it is you do to me

As I sit here
yearning
I imagine you
sleeping
And I want to hold you endlessly
Forever in my arms for eternity

Reviews

[melissa]

romantic , i really liked it!

[sajen ali]

awesome

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

wow ...what a beautiful longing love .... not many could feel the other in such a passion longing way ... true love , I am glad you could experiance it :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Those daydream of love are the good memories of old age. I like the way you expressed the need and desire. A love unknown is sometime OK. Allow us to have hope and great dreams. If we are lucky. A few dreams can come true. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Canicus]

I love this. so much emotion good job.

[AliceNWonderland]

I liked it. It was a nice love poem.

[Antonio Valentino]

Very, very, sweet poem. You are a romantic.

Lucky you.

Antonio :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Beautiful, romantic poem!

[Wolfwind Words]

I can take this piece two ways... on is on a human level where one see's what one can't have and it makes the blood bubble and pop inside, till there is nothing to do but want to scream.
The over view is that of someone walking past the pet store and seeing the perfect puppy. Wanting it so bad, to give it a home and to love it, yet mom says no.

Alot of power and life's madness in this.

When I see this situation, I always ask my self...what are the odds of sucess in making that desire into a reality... If they are high..I try....
If they are low.... I keep on walking down the street to better and brighter things.


A great poem. flowed well and came with a look inside one of life's tricky situations.

Aaron Maycroft

[~Unashamed Love~]

This is sooo good!
I can relate to the way you feel!
Beautiful, keep it up!
=)