Cautious Beginnings

He pulls me into himself as if he

Wanted to wrap his soul around me

To morph into one being without boundaries

We stand still cautiously breathing in

Each other’s existing existence

Reviews

[E.H. Monroe]

I'm a sappy one. I liked this for two reasons...well three.
1. I tend to like everything you do.
2. The intertwining souls and morphing together as one entity based in emotion is an overpowering visual BUT
3. you seem to pull it back OH SO SLIGHTLY but saying that you both stand there "cautiously" not folding all the way in, there is an apprehension i feel, before the fall.

Its mmm mmm good.

[Ed Hart]

well, i'm not sure i'd call it 'cautious', and it's certainly a bit down the trail from 'beginning'...but, here's hoping for a happy and long new year

[Robin]

beginnings in the cold echoes of endings