September Sun

I stand watching the river flow as it has for centuries

Taking shallow breathes under the furtive caresses of

The September Sun

I step back shyly- careful not to disturb

Autumn regally moving in

"Darling, your hands are cold" he says

Well don't just stand there...

My Soul is frostbitten-

But this Sun sure feels good

Why are You here?

 

Reviews

[Crowley]

Ouch.....beauty wrapped in a hard question, I do kind of relate fall to a need to regroup and hunker down with the family. But maybe my family doesn't want me....lol...damn. I'm here because I need you....cuz, I have realized that I am never enough. Great stuff

[Emily B]

breaths . . .

[Robin]

love how you play the nature of the heart against the backdrop of nature's hearth