Done

The tense, twisted knots in my body and

Stony flames in my "I'm Done" gaze

Melted away in waves

Under the sweetness of your love-radiating gaze

You held me to yourself

Sucking out the poison

Wrapping around my soul

Your warmth diffusing underneath my skin

I found a smile for you

Hidden behind the burning walls of

"I can weather this"

Enough

Enough you thought

And sent me off

Off with a million thoughts running

Through my head

Each one of you...

I had gleaned enough strength from your arms

To weather this

Though I had not had enough of you

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

you are right ,i always said it love has more power than we ever think
it drops any barrier ,not only gives warmth,it gives sweet feelings and sense
of real satisfaction,i will need nothing more once you are around
i will never have enough of you,you were like made just for me,and i for you
lovely write

[Robin]

most excellent , I can feel the pacing , the emotion is cast perfect .

[Moonflower]

I loved the tone and melancholy of this, a reeling tidal wave of emotion..well done.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

your words peel my shell to reveal blush dream interiors~ deep breathing poetic~

[Lilly Negoi]

"off with a million thoughts running
through my head
each one of you..."
:) love effects...