Lost In The Crowd

I nearly fried my brains trying to find a title for this...still don't know if it fits

In the silence of

Clamor I taste my salty

Smiles falling down

Reviews

[arbitrary jane]

why do we do that? smile acrid smiles, and then choke ourselves on them later...
polished and captivating.
i especially like that there is no punctuation. the reader creates meaning (and meanings) as he reads, inserting his own pauses, breaks, slowings-down and runshings-through.

[DiMar4u]

utterly brilliant, thank you.

[Ed Hart]

it fits

[Robin]

yes, the isolation still felt even although surrounded my a thousand unknown , uncaring , faces as the heart breaks ...