The Gift of Time

She pours love into sheets of poetry

To keep him safe from the winter cold

Dangling her feet in the streams of time

She tries to give him time

Donning a coat of patience

Praying tis not all in vain

Reviews

[Writer *78*]

They say that time heals all. You truly take the reader on a journey unlike no other. You make the reader feel passionate towards this piece with every word that is uttered. You make the reader feel your pain when you say him. You make the reader see what she is going through phyisically, mentally, and emotionally. But most of all, you make the reader understand further the power of time and patience. This is an unforgettable masterpiece. Great work.

-Fredric Cilbrith III

[Tony]

Giving someone your time is the greatest gift you can give anyone. Great poem.

[Robin]

to ponder the intangible value of patience ..

[bluessadmood]

Ohh how i loved this..
that she infused all the love into her words
they came so sweet and warm like a sweet shield from winter cold
dangling her feet in streams of time ..to get some of it
ha ha,what lovely thoughts
lovely write..

[Ed Hart]

i love it that you can balance yourself, and keep all those things turning in the air at the same time