Worry Cloud

My spirit falters

Caught in a grey worry cloud

Mixes right and wrong

Reviews

[Branches]

I'm very familiar with these sentiments indeed. Nice way of putting it.

[Robin]

the grey of confusion , where horizon and sky blur

[Jeff]

So many decisions, infinite paths along the way. Just keep moving forward.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

love your word mixture~fluid swirls of spirit imagery~

[Tony]

"Decisions, decisions"-- it sounds like to me.
Nice thoughts here-- and like what you did with the form.

M