Serve

Give me some manner

In which I may serve you

Else, I shall run mad

By ever-taking and never-giving back

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Ohh thats pure love if we dont stop us now
i will take everything as i gone wild and mad
if you dont stop me,teach me manners
tell me how to serve you,in best of ways
then i am lost in all of it,i will just take
and never give back..if you dont stop me
and teach me things i could only learn from you
lovely write..

[Tony]

Interesting-- very profound, this can be read and appreciated in so many dimensions.

[Nimbus Thread]

The balance of life and love. A pure truth. Clean and profound.

[Robin]

passion seeking balance

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

such intricacy ~ a brocade of other things whispering through the braids of each line~
beautiful offering~