Little Lotus Flower

Little Lotus Flower

A Poem by A.A.Romanczuk

Little lotus flower

My entire existence is shaken

Upon beholding your perfection

Were you to allow it

Today

I should bend before thee in awe

And perfect submission

Paralyze me, my Lord

With a single gesture of yours

Whoever has been graced by your presence

Has learnt the true definition of peace

Has witnessed the true nature of perfect love

Dearest little lotus flower

I shall seek to nurture and love thee

For as long as the Gods shall permit

I am your willing captive

Bewitched by the purity of your soul

© 2010 A.A.Romanczuk


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such delicacy in the innocent worship~ I wonder now if you are like me~ where~when caught by a presentation of the world in the body of something exquisite~ you are caught for hours in a dual fold of examining/adoring the beauty until the beauty is all there is for those precious hours and life reinhales meaning again~

Posted 14 Years Ago


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mmm, symbols - the lotus as a union of elements!? lotus as the representation of god?...i may be reading too much here, but i definitely think you meant much more in this...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

such delicacy in the innocent worship~ I wonder now if you are like me~ where~when caught by a presentation of the world in the body of something exquisite~ you are caught for hours in a dual fold of examining/adoring the beauty until the beauty is all there is for those precious hours and life reinhales meaning again~

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ohh if all love was like this ,then Plato will come alive again,ha ha
love will shake everything as you behold perfection
if you just let me today,i will bend before you
and submit,you paralyse me,few moves
your presence gave much peace
i witnessed something different
in your hands,i be your captive
till end of days,purity of soul
i never seen the like before
how you take over my mind
and i still love it,even took over everything
just loved it all
lovely write..

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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