Armed In Smiles

Weeping in corners

Torn by fears

I meet you

Armed in smiles

We are a million light years apart

Touch me

Make me come alive

This is not

Alright

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Ohh how i could understand ,this is so perfect
everything thats set here..she is never weak,though she is trapped in a corner like always
and she weeps..its those fears ..i will follow you ,and i will meet you there,smiling as i know you
you brighten everything and send you lights even some million years apart..i bathe in it
so touch me how i longed for that ,its for that i followed,make me live again..like you used to
no even feels so great ,feels something i cant bear ,too much for me,something not right
but quite alright for me..
lovely write..

[Robin]

a smile caught in a swirl

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[Desert Dreamer]

I have lived your words, living life full of smiles, but even "armed in smiles" the sadness of a situation that is not quite right comes through, even though we long for those touches that our sense desire...the tears come begging one to leave, to find a world where your smiles are met with joy.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

the longing in translation between your pen and the papyrus of the audience writes itself in thick ink calligraphy like a taste of forbidden mullberries to stain the epic canvas of human ache in longing~ magnificent~