Receding Anesthesia

Anesthetic happiness

Twisted serpentine

Through my choking veins

I turned glazed eyes

Toward the dying skies

As a beast clawed me apart

Life juice burned my lips

Wilting rose petals

I am folded, wrung, and ironed

By the pain

Star particles kiss their way

Down my blank visage

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

This is so dreamy and poetic ,you just could not read this
its happiness stream in my veins ,already choked,i cant feel
i turned my eyes to some dying skies,saw nothing
only a beast try to tear me apart
life burned my lips,i am just a wilting rose,no use
i am folded and squeezed and ironed,with pain
still i feel heavenly star lights going down their way
only to end on on a blank page..thats mine
how i loved this..so many million images squeezed in a few words
lovely write..

[Robin]

an intense return of the senses

[Jeff Loquist]

I just had a tooth pulled and have a mouth full of anesthetic at this moment...many spiders and inject a venom that numbs the victim so they never realize they are being consumed...I think many people have that ability, also...you said it perfectly

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

vivid canvas you have painted with hues streaming through to capture the reader's aural mind~ exquisite!