Jewelled Snakes

I gasp with longing

Words gone to hell

Scarlett rain

Flowers bent

In maddening pain

I need to feel you

Near me

Jewelled snakes

Crawl down my cheek

As I wither away

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Ohh another charmer and blazing words..
i am gasping and longing..words could never tell,or enough
rain was not of use to water those withering flowers
bent in maddening pain,how i need to feel you
like i am mad want to be near you
those snakes ,burning tears
its their time the come
as i wither away
what lovely though sad ,but sadness brought all the magic with it
lovely write..

[Jeff Loquist]

this makes me think of a necklace...meant to be a symbol of love...but nothing more than a symbol of absence and regret...it is excellent

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

this is breathtaking bejewled primal sensuality fleshing itself into sensate textures with each line~ stunning!

[Robin]

an emotionally charged maelstrom of images swirl through the mind ~