Champagne

Champagne sparkling

By candlelight

A lonely toast

One-sided conversation

Champagne douses the

Candlelight

Another lonely night

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Ohh like i am there and looking,and sighing ,ha ha
the candles and the sparkling liquer
and off course ,all the talk is coming from one side
the other is indulging in the whole scene and dreaming
of the nice taste..and the little light,,like shadows
minds dozing and feeling light
and that other sparkle inside is rekindled
more and more..yes its another lovely night
shall i go further and tell whats next,ha ha
guess not for here seems like things to end
wish there is some more ha ha
lovely write..

[Creepy Swine Guy]

Beautiful write. Loneliness is overtly written in and not extraordinary because many people are lonely. But by the use of the champagne, you show that this evening was supposed to be special. This person suffered a terrible disappointment.

Excellent use of language.