Sin Incarnate

I am everything

That there is to

Despise

To abhor

I am

Sin incarnate

Imperfection

Blatant

Unable to

Withstand

The littlest

Of temptations

How shall I ever

Attain perfection?

 

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Ohh i dont know how you say that..
as i see ,i see everything that pleases the eyes
and how the ear loves to hear,the imaginative words
if its sin incarnate,i would love to indulge in that sin to the rest of my days
to enjoy the pearls that i see..what i see is like a treasure never discovered
but by me..how lucky..if you cant stand the temptations,its vunerability
and its the loveliest thing in a human..he looks so beautiful that way
i see everything the opposite of what you say..
i dont know what you say is just metaphorically speaking or its
just a moment of sadness and anger,but for me it will not change a thing,ha ha
i still see the same picture i saw since the first day i began to look that way
lovely write..

[Ed Hart]

my kind of girl

[Alicia Schroeder]

Very nice write