Heal My Soul

Touch your lips

To my soul

Heal it

With the holy

Glow of

Yours

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

oh such loveliness in a few words..heal my soul
my soul aching for your touch ,it always knew no remedy any good
but a kiss from..from lips that touch on aching soul
its the holy glow of your own that i seek after
one touch from you and i will be cured from all of it
i just know no one could do it..the way you do
lovely very enchinting write
lovely write..

[Robin]

poetic intimacy

[Alicia Schroeder]

short-deep and sweet, very nice

[df]

i see a kiss is more in the kiss in your viewpoint

[Adelia Alighieri]

Perfectly deep. Great job.

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sometimes someone writes something that touches the soul and sits profoundly in their minds..this for me is one of those moments...thank you..outstanding..

[Another Relic]

A beautiful idea to think about. Nice.

[Emily B]

oh, oh, the tallest words I've met in a while . . .

[Jeff]

Beautiful poem. You said so much with so few words, and it was done perfectly.

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a rich depth to this gentle plea... You reveal a need for wholeness.. healing from pain and all that life gives.. And your words call out to the one who is able to reach inside you in the most profound, beautiful way to lift the heartache away. Stunning confessions..