All Of Nature Sings...

Ping pang taps the rain

Caught in its own

Ferocious rhythm

Flish flash dances the lightning

Across charcoal gray skies

Accompanied by Indra’s growl

Sri Vayu restlessly rattles

The blinds

Ping Pang

Flish flash

All of nature sings

Of the sacred Aum

 

Author's Note

Eh??

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Yes when nature starts to play..
rain drops come like mad,rain rain how you bring special sounds
and changed my moods..along come with you the lightning your friend
he will change the lighting,from so bright then all lights may dim out
he will light up the sky,like preparing the stage for a noisy play
you play at your ease..the clouds will come and go like they danced
the skies changed colors like a pretty woman will paint her face
red blue deep dark ,and all colors..all will add to the wild scene
when nature starts to sing..my heart fill with joy
lovely write..

[Dinesh Sairam]

Some Indian mythology mixed in there? :P I'd say "Vayu" would suffice. "Sri" is for respect. It's like saying "Respected wind" =D I liked the "Ping pang" and "Flish flash". Some nice onomatopoeia (At last! I used that word!). Keep writing :)

PS. Kudos for the trochaic title :)

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Yes..indeed...thunder storms are magical...:)

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Thank You :)

[Desert Dreamer]

All of nature sings including us..you create a wonderful rhythm here.