The Quiet Broken

The Quiet Broken

A Poem by A.A.Romanczuk

All is still

The quiet broken

Only by the rapid singing of my heart

I will sleep well

With thoughts of You tonight

© 2010 A.A.Romanczuk


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Ah! I love that feeling, after being with someone that makes your heart sing, you go to sleep with your heart glowing. And you dream the best dreams that you can never remember in the morning, but you don't mind.

And you capitalized "You." I am not sure if you meant to refer to God or to simply place a significance on the word, but either way, it adds to the message of the poem. Beautiful piece!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Oh I simply meant to emphasize the word :) Generally if the poem is about God...I'll put it under religious...even though sometimes I do forget :D I love that feeling too :D Oh thank You eversosweetly, it is so kind of You to review my work :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Ah! I love that feeling, after being with someone that makes your heart sing, you go to sleep with your heart glowing. And you dream the best dreams that you can never remember in the morning, but you don't mind.

And you capitalized "You." I am not sure if you meant to refer to God or to simply place a significance on the word, but either way, it adds to the message of the poem. Beautiful piece!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank You, TImagination :) :) Many..find..it strange that a female should write poems for them..and run...there is..was..is? one who cherished them...who looked upon them with wonder as if they were some sort of magical gift...he is/was the exception to every other guy I've met...

Posted 14 Years Ago


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That's a nice way of putting it. I'm sure any guy who heard these sentiments from a loved one couldn't help but feel appreciated and loved. Like it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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:) Thank You, Blues :) You understood perfectly....it brings the best sleep..thinking of that one person..it brings peace :)
Thank You, Jeff :) My meaning was not at all of a broken heart..quite the opposite..although if that is what You get out of it...I would not tamper with Your perception..

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like the last two lines. Living with a broken heart is hard, but sometimes you need to hold onto the impossible thoughts just to get by.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I will sleep ll with thoughts of you tonight..
best company all through the hours..
this drak wiet night is only broken by my heart singing
he is telling me he is so happy just with thoughts of you tonight
this could be a great song ..one of the best
lovely write..

Posted 14 Years Ago


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