Ah! I love that feeling, after being with someone that makes your heart sing, you go to sleep with your heart glowing. And you dream the best dreams that you can never remember in the morning, but you don't mind.
And you capitalized "You." I am not sure if you meant to refer to God or to simply place a significance on the word, but either way, it adds to the message of the poem. Beautiful piece!
Oh I simply meant to emphasize the word :) Generally if the poem is about God...I'll put it under religious...even though sometimes I do forget :D I love that feeling too :D Oh thank You eversosweetly, it is so kind of You to review my work :)
Ah! I love that feeling, after being with someone that makes your heart sing, you go to sleep with your heart glowing. And you dream the best dreams that you can never remember in the morning, but you don't mind.
And you capitalized "You." I am not sure if you meant to refer to God or to simply place a significance on the word, but either way, it adds to the message of the poem. Beautiful piece!
Thank You, TImagination :) :) Many..find..it strange that a female should write poems for them..and run...there is..was..is? one who cherished them...who looked upon them with wonder as if they were some sort of magical gift...he is/was the exception to every other guy I've met...
:) Thank You, Blues :) You understood perfectly....it brings the best sleep..thinking of that one person..it brings peace :)
Thank You, Jeff :) My meaning was not at all of a broken heart..quite the opposite..although if that is what You get out of it...I would not tamper with Your perception..
I will sleep ll with thoughts of you tonight..
best company all through the hours..
this drak wiet night is only broken by my heart singing
he is telling me he is so happy just with thoughts of you tonight
this could be a great song ..one of the best
lovely write..
“A dreamer is one who can only find his way by moonlight, and his punishment is that he sees the dawn before the rest of the world.” - Oscar Wilde
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