I Am Not So Eloquent

Words soft and elegant form in my head

On a melodic silhouette

But I am not so eloquent

I am afraid to open the chasms of my heart and soul

Afraid to let those words pass my lips

Lest I come to regret them

My female heart is fragile

It beats like butterfly wings

Rainbow emotions pass through my veins

By the window, like an evening wind, I sigh

It seems that I am left to throw my pretty words around inside

And to keep longing and dreams

Safely Locked Away

Rainbow emotions flood me

They take control

But I cannot..

Think of this any longer

A sob of protest arises

I will allow myself to be taken away on the feathered wings of sleep

And sleep a dreamless sleep

Reviews

[alan peter kelly]

the title and content are a delicate and endearing contradiction...it works...humility always works...especially if it is real...and i know your exposure in this piece is real...beautiful yet fragile...a tender gathering of syllables keen with life and soft as silk...a touch of melancholy...an aspect of a stage in life...and stages are adaptable...organic...this write is fingertips softly across a furrowed brow...lovely...you will dream again...

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Oh..thank You Alan :)...it is always touching to read Your kind, sincere reviews :) How beautifully You've expressed Yourself..yet again...making my work seem magical..thank You

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Thank You..I am honored...
I confess...the hardest part of writing..I often find is choosing a title..
That was beautiful....what You said..You too...speak for many...indeed..most people, I think..
Thank You..

[bluessadmood]

Oh what a wonderful title..i am not so eloquent
how you speak for so many..so many dreamers
dreams shaping in to many words that dont fit to any language
so if i utter them no one would understandfor who could understand dreams
wish i could open my mouth and tell of them ,cry them
they just wont come out..like i lost all sound and was mute
wish some could hear me telling my dreams
so much emotions burning inside of me
and could not come out ..for now i will just shut my mouth and try to sleep ,sleep in my dreams
or dream the whole of my sleep..i could never tell,if it was a sleep or a dream
a a great lovely write..how you could reach me through
lovely write..