The Sun Asked Of Me

My soul heavily laden soared
In search of repose
The Sun with His limber fingers
Drew apart Night's veil
And hastened to caress my pallid cheek
"What makes you to weep so?"
Asked He of me
And I subjected myself with gratitude
To His kiss, freely given
Allowing it to touch my soul
"Do not you see me shine for you?"
Asked He
With Patience eternal
Strengthened, I clasped my hands
In peaceful prayer
And stayed the wretched Pain in Its path
If only for a moment..
It was a moment worthwhile.

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Yes this how we feel at times,soul so heavy with thoughts
we drag our bodies like a burden,we hardly do any chores
but suddenly we feel the light flooding us and kissing us
i am there for you you should not feel so bad
i came,you see,only for you..and then you know
its a whole new path laid open just for you
these moments like feeling in a trance
we have all kinds of thoughts alternating
it like a whole being is being washed up
its going through changes which at last
take a lovely shape,like something so new
lovely write..

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Yes...unable to think of anything but our heaviness..weariness...sadness...until we allow ourselves to notice the little things in our surroundings...until we allow ourselves to be distracted...and there is that metaphorical sun kissing us..embracing us...and we grasp our purpose once more...forgetting tears..forgetting Pain and walk forth able to praise the Lord ...able to see the good :) Thank You, Moayad...I am glad You understand my writing :)