Blossoms

My heart bursts into vibrant blossoms

Delicately Enchanting

Fragile tendrils of emotion wrap themselves

Around my wavering Existence

Unwilling to let go

An eternal Spring takes oer

Where barren Winter

Long has reigned

You remind me of violets basking in the sun

Of soft Summer rain

And of the stately trees that I do so adore

Reviews

[A.A.Romanczuk]

:) Thank You... I will try to keep this in mind and improve :)

[Ed Hart]

nice poem...suggestion: old words like 'ore', to my mind, do not enhance...also, your incidental capitalization is another old time thing, and makes rough places, where smooth is an easier read