Allow Me To Steal A Few Moments Of Your Time

There's a few words I have in mind

Allow me to steal a few moments

Of Your Time

The seasons seem to change in flickers

I write down my impressions of past events

I've committed no crime

In shedding tears, in coloring lines

A flower pressed between the pages

A photograph

I've kept the things where Time stands still

These streets are ever changing

These days are never ending

I amble on smiling

A lesson learned in Time

Would You stay with me a while?

I'd like to remember us like this

Intoxicated with our own Youth

Remember Your sparkling eyes

To light the way in the dark

There's so many words I should speak

Yet I'll let Silence tell You all

As I wait here patiently

For the Dawn to come again.

Reviews

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

beautiful..:)

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Oh my.... I..Thank All Of You For Reviewing My Work and ..Wow..Thank You

[emmah]

- an eternal spark here - not spark, flame actually - and this hue of silence - tells so well - it brims with an exquisite love - this exquisite love - it reads irrevocably brilliant - brilliant!!!

[Ed Hart]

ah, 'sparkling eyes'...well, that's different...

[Crowley]

Damn....the tone was amazingly consistent and controlled, kind of made the piece spiritual in a way. I really loved this.

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what a soft and gentle piece of writing..as M Kilani said..humble is a very good description lovely work

[M.Kilani]

WOW !!
how humble were the last four lines !! this is a mind-taking piece, I can easily see myself in your shoes. now if I may ask you to allow me to steal few moment to stay, just to admire such an image !!
well done .

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. ah, these are timeless words ... rendered with so much warmth and affection and romance ... beautifully felt, written and received ...