Fragile

With a last violent blush

He leaves the world smothered

By darkness

And something inside me tears

I am left

Gasping for air

Trembling

Afraid

Longing

Undescribably sad

Curled up in a fetal position

Contents Fragile

Shattered Hope flies down the well worn paths

My mind is like an island

Drowning in the sea

And my heart calls out to you

Echoing

Where are You? Where are You?

Find Me

Longing clogs my throat

Creating small animal noises

Envelop me in Your Love

Find Me

I need your presence

Every day has been

The equivalent of ten thousand years

Torturously slow

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Oh dear how you shape some few words into a very strong scene
very few could only do that..wish i had the strength of your pen..ha ha
and he leaves me with drakness so deep that smothers me and lets my tears
i tremble afraid so sad and fragile ,how i long to your presence near
mind like an island drowning,and heart never stops calling for you
and i will never stop visiting your page..i have such strong bad moods
when they come i pay a visit here,and i lighten up
God how creativity is a blessing ..how i start thinking
lovely write..

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Thank You, dear Blues :) Ah..but Your pen Is strong...few have moved me to tears as some of Your writings have...how beautifully You understand..:) Oh...I am so happy to be able to lighten Your bad moods, Moayad...I know mine are lightened when I come to this site :)

[A.A.Romanczuk]

:) Thank You, Serah.....I am left speechless...and of course, You've nailed it...the meaning....and ...if I inspire..then I am extremely glad, dear Serah and oh...simply...thank You..
:)

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. oh gosh ... that's epic writing ... straight from the soul ... and straight into the soul ... time never travels ... when you and i stop ... time doesn't breathe ... when you leave ... time hides in your absence ... won't you let it come out ... alex, you always inspire ... your words are so pure and so magical ... ravishing poetry ...