The Stars Are Extinguished

My world is turning gray
One by one, the stars are extinguished
Upon the velvet sky
In the frigid Chaos..a beacon illuminates a path
There you stand
A feeling of fragility permeates my psyche
I seem to waver in your embrace
And you too, are not well
Tethers, invisible, slither up this faltering shell
And in the darkness bind it
The road is long, the road is hard
And I am in corner, feeling as if there is no way out
But there is,
And I will find it
Will you?
Take of my strength, if you need it
My hand lies outstretched towards you
My shoulder, yours to take
My heart lies opened like a book for you
Take of these, take of these, I offer them to you
One by one, the stars are extinguished
I lie awake praying for Dawn

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Ohh how these writings makes me light headed ,i just cant feel my feet
yes its a dark world ,its like a part been hughly lighted
and little by little they dim out only so we are left in the dark
if its not for his light..ohh how love could help in everything ,its a super power
a great weapon..the best..with it you walk safe and strong
the road is long ,but with you we will walk it to the end
i will give you everything my strength..my heart i open for you
i will shelter you..i will keep you from stroms and all harm s way
i will embrace you strong even you achebut you never feel but me
so lovely write..

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Thank You, dear Blues :) I am so glad...oh yes...Love I am convinced is the basis of life..it could save all if they would but understand the true meaning of the word...oh..I speak not only of romantic Love...but universal Love...His light...it is like a lighthouse...this world the ocean and we the ships...ships struggling against the winds..against the tides...yea even against the sun..against time...we fight illusion...trying to safely come into harbor...and His lighthouse...it is eternally shining...beckoning us to Him....Lovely...Yes...we must shelter all the foundering ones and impart our strength to them...for we too at times will founder and expect the same turn.....A lovely review Blues :)

[A.A.Romanczuk]

:) I will try... to not let You down in this

[...]

. oh ... gosh ... if this be the song you sing today ... let it echo ... let it resound ... let it be compelling ... and let it be profound ... stunning poetry ... overwhelming and yet so surreal ...