Vulture

Cracked stained glass and shards of sun

Sorrow oozes out of my crippled fingers

Concentrated life pools on the lifeless floor

I look on wrapped in a robe of apathy

I slashed myself open with the entrance of love

It now threatens to peck out my liver

Reviews

[Twistedme]

Very much enjoyed. Prometheus bound haha
There is a rock musical adaptation of it coming out this year which the legendary Serj Tankian is working on, I myself am looking forward to it...
Again great little poem with great meaning :D

[A.A.Romanczuk]

:O That is Noteworthy news. Thank you :) as I really do love the play.

[R J Askew]

I esp like 'shards of sun' and 'concentrated life pools' . All the sibilance in the first couple of lines also sounds sharp and slashing.

[Aella.lives]

Imagery here is outstanding.. now time to go read that play everyone seems to know... Great write.

[A.A.Romanczuk]

you won't regret it when you do :D

[Ian H Morrison]

ok pretty good well written and so full of emotion excellent

[Baby Ricochet]

Love the promethius reference at the end. Did I spell that right?

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Prometheus :) Thanks :)

[Marie]

Prometheus bound...

[A.A.Romanczuk]

it's one of my favorite plays :)

[Marie]

I could see the play immediately in your poem.

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Thank you for this

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

Very intense, very nice write.