This Girl

This Girl

A Poem by Hilario Alves
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Short poem about a girl I know

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So I know this girl right
She's cool and bright
Very polite
Her body is tight
She's a sight for sore eyes and she makes my head light
Being near her is a delight
She gives me a fright, every night my brain comes alight
And all I can do is think about her all night
In love? Not quite
But I have the desire to ignite her candlelight
Caress her and tell her everything is alright
Stop putting up a fight
Grab my hand and let's rewrite our blight

© 2013 Hilario Alves


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"She's a sight for sore eyes and she makes my head light

Being near her is a delight

She gives me a fright, every night my brain comes alight

And all I can do is think about her all night"

A very good rhyming poem...Bravo

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hilario Alves

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your time
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)

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Added on September 11, 2013
Last Updated on September 12, 2013
Tags: poem, poetry, girl, her, love, not love

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Hilario Alves
Hilario Alves

Nottingham, Nottinghamshire, United Kingdom



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