Believe

Some say Love sucks and say it does not exsist

Others say it is real, and just has many twists

I do not know where i stand on this, i'm torn on which is fact and which is fake.

I've had my heart soar and sing, but i've also had it bleed and break.

 

I do believe that it may not be fiction

But i cannot make a clear prediction

I do think i've had it once

 

But i got my heart ripped out and was upset for months

I think we must believe in it no matter how rare it may be

It is the closest thing we have to magic, so we have to believe

 

I just hope one day I will be lucky enough to find love

that won't break my heart and help me once more sing

Because life is much to cruel to not believe in magical things

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[RAWR!]

:) you clever little girl

[Captain]

The important thing is faith, that is what I got from this. Beautiful, sad and sweet message. Very nice, though I would try revising it without trying to rhyme.
'Captain

[Annie]

I love it! The last line was especially poignant - the rhyme helped to tie the whole poem together. Beautiful job :)

[Shy Girl]

This was awesome..love is magic when it comes round..and it doesn't come round often. The real, hit you over the head kind is just phenominal to witness and a wonder to experience. But that wonder is two fold...a great pain becomes it's sister emotion just as fierce. (but that's when you find out if that special love was real or not...but the depth of hurt you carry) Not saying you should be hurt but your poem speaks true and very well on target of both emotions. I really loved this piece. There was a tad of humor as well that brightened this topic smartly... :)

[Mockingbird]

it's true, it does take a very long time to heal from heartbreak. however, it doesn't mean you won't find love again. a lot of emotions in this poem. excellent piece.

[The White Wolf]

Magick is very real and so is heartbreak. To find the the magick of love we must suffer the curse of learning how to lose it. It is through the loss of love that we find we have a heart. A very raw write, friend. Nicely done.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Love is magical, and it can restore what the heart has lost... Keep believing.
Have faith that the magic will come once more... it will...
Lovely write!

[WhiteWillow]

You must put faith in love; believe in that which you cannot see, and know that it will carry you through when you least expect it.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Believing a relationship can work, trust and compassion for one another should be key elements to love. If neither feels the need to work or have those things in a relationship then it simply shouldnt be.

Nicely done.

[Emily B]

it doesn't get any easier with age, i almost stopped believing in the magic once