Believe

Some say Love sucks and say it does not exsist

Others say it is real, and just has many twists

I do not know where i stand on this, i'm torn on which is fact and which is fake.

I've had my heart soar and sing, but i've also had it bleed and break.

 

I do believe that it may not be fiction

But i cannot make a clear prediction

I do think i've had it once

 

But i got my heart ripped out and was upset for months

I think we must believe in it no matter how rare it may be

It is the closest thing we have to magic, so we have to believe

 

I just hope one day I will be lucky enough to find love

that won't break my heart and help me once more sing

Because life is much to cruel to not believe in magical things

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Jai Garg]

A very positive poem.

[Hachamecha]

Because life is much -too- cruel to not believe in magical things
I think that is the correct way-well, I'm not very into grammar.
anyway, it was a very good story. Nice ryhming, and it flowed very nicely :)
I liked it.

[kaylynnmelody♥]

I feel the same way. That's probably because we are the same age, ha. Beautiful write. Very enjoyable.

[R J Askew]

Tis true, it can make us sore as well as soar. I think you are young and have many more learning experiences to suffer and enjoy, with hopefully more of the latter.

I think your analysis is sensible. You have worked things out for yourself. And I esp like your conclusion in the last verse. Yes, there do have to be magical things.

Enjoyable read.

[Blindfolded]

A very nice write on a sometimes difficult topic. Love can do many things to you but once you find it, an existence becomes a life..something you look forward to every day.

[Sal Hylling]

There needs to be a 'LOVE' button! Great Work. I loved it.

[Hayley]

This has a surreal quality about it, a questioning quality, and a longing quality. I sense a background of clarity, however, that is so often lost. All together, well crafted!

[quinfinn]

i honestly and deeply feel your words here...trust me, i write a lot about this subject... A LOT! you have cleverly captured the doubt which failure of love instills in all of us, and for some of us,months are not enough time to feel normal again, sometimes, depending on how deeply we are wounded, it can take years. beautifully written piece...superb!

[The Scholar]

"It is the closest thing we have to magic, so we have to believe," and "Because life is much too cruel to not believe in magical things," were two of the most beautiful lines ever.



One edit: The first "to" in the last line should be "too."

i like what you had to say, liked the rhyme scheme