Troubles

yYou know that feeling you get when you are completly oblivious to the problems you have been struggling with?

When your troubles are taken away ?

Its only for a short while

it doesnt come around often though so you must cherish your time with it

It only comes around when you least expect it to

Ive tried getting that by putting in my headphones and listening to that rocker music that i hold near and dear

try to find it,and  it will never be found

Some people spend their whole lives looking for this

they end up suffering and dying

Keep your mind open, is the best chance you have

 

Reviews

[Shy Girl]

Lovely expression of feelings... :)

[Roe]

lovely write

[Captain]

I must say, this is one of my favorites I've read so far.
'Captain

[eatmills]

I like the sense of ambiguity of the poem; it makes the poem rather personal to the reader. Your last line is also thought provoking, sometimes the things we seek come in strange packages.