Songbird

I wanna be a songbird

I wanna greet the morning with a happy tune

I want to soar above the clouds that rest in the sky

I want to watch the sun rise and watch the rain fall

 

I wanna be a songbird

I want to fly away to a distant land

A far away place where i can be alone

A place isolated from the rest of the world

Have my sweet song fill the atmosphere

 

I wanna be a songbird

With colorful feathers that shine in the light

I want to sing to the sun as it slowly goes to rest

I want to hum to the moon as it mesmorizes us all

Race the stars as they sparkle like glitter

 

To fly across the sky to another place

To sing to the earth as she wakes

To hum ther a lullaby as she slips into slumber

Would be an awfully big adventure

But i wouldn't mind

I wanna be a songbird

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

I want to be now too. Such flight and freedom.. I really like this..x

[paradise]

beautiful poem

[hopelessromantic]

nice

[Black]

i like the piece, i like the methaphor,
but just maybe, you should think about the flow of the poem
it doesnt work out that well ,... atleast for e,
its just an advice

[Shy Girl]

This piece captivated me from the beginning right till the ending..wonderfully wrote piece. Very nice and flowing...had a tinch of sadness but in the light of your parallel to a songbird..made that sad sense quiet in the background.. :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is Beautiful!!!...reminds me of Nelly Furtado's song~"I'm like a bird"~ one of my favorite songs. A Superb write! I love it!