Change

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People say change is good and is to be taken with ease

Others say they hate it and wish it would cease

Friends that you have stood by,trusted and loved slowly disappearing is something i fear

I wish it didnt happen thats what id like to hear

But we cant stop change from happening even though we wish we could

Change makes up weep sad tears of sorrow

Wish it was a dream and that we'd wake up tomarrow

Some people make it look easy dealing with change

When for others it can be one of the hardest things not wanting to bare

I know it will get bad, horrible and seem like a terrible life

I just wish it didnt hurt as bad, that i wouldnt have to go through this horrible strife

Reviews

[Shy Girl]

I know a lot of peeps that hate to change. Change can be good in some ways but some of the hardest things to change are found within ourselves. Outside we can sort of control to an extent...but inside you have to notice the problem first and then figure out what you can do to fix or bend a bit to it..I think that you described this problem very well..you took outside issues and related it to your feelings inside. Very well done :)

[deadlysilence]

I love the way you write and how your words have a rhythmic flow to it very good poem I love it

[Roe]

Some of us hate change but others crave for change..... this is a wonderful poem and i enjoyed reading it.

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i don't like change either like once i saw a novella and i looooved the main character i then saw him on another show but it wasn't the same -_-

[Lily Mae]

Change is all about risk. The risk to step forward and make positive changes where it needs to happen in our lives..and yet we often choose to ignore it out of fear.
It's like standing in the middle of a cross roads.. we have to choose our path and jump in with full love and no expectations...just do it ..live it and breathe it..xo

[Warren L.G De Mills]

You have a good idea here my friend but honestly I believe this piece can be improved. There are a few issues in this body of work that need re-working such as redundancies, spelling and grammar, I'd recommend revisiting this one and fixing it up a bit. But for what it is (if you don't wish to edit it) it is a good concept.

[Kayla Etreni]

i love this!! desibes my life rn!

[AchingAlexandra]

ease and cease don't rhyme .
tomorrow *
a couple of the lines stand out cause they don't follow the rhyme sequence .

[Team_Jaward_Gale]

so true nice lovely and nice imagery