I am from...

first perfessional poem i wrot in 9th grade in english. its about me being adopted. also i wrote this in school thats why i finally was able to format some of my writing.

I am from people who are strangers to me

 

From people who's faces i don't recongnize

 

From people who only knew me for a short while.

I am from a unfamiler place. A plce with a large glass window through which adults look at me

 

I live with people who are not related to me.

 

I do not look like them they do not look like me.

 

I am from a family who did not have me, but gave me a chance to be a part of THEIR family.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Michael of Gilead]

Seems a bit detached to me...like you have more to say, try re-working it?

[KAREN]

Well crafted poem! Heartfelt feeling, and touching!

[Yellow Butterfly]

This is special.....

You have opened your heart to the world to let them know....
YOU ARE THE PERSON YOU ARE BECAUSE THE PEOPLE WHO RAISED YOU...LOVE YOU!

Beautifully penned

[Nish...]

Very touching...

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Isn't that wonderful? I believe that it is such a tremendous gift to parents and the child when the birth parents make the choice to give the child a better life by giving them up. Wonderfully written, thank you for sharing this one.

[Poeticpiers]

You were Chosen that makes you special

[alexlessah]

Awwwh i love this, i know how you feel exactly.

[nunldon]

Hi Beautifully,
Perfessional ? (I'm sorry)
Imperfect. (are'nt we all)
Typo's matter little.
This was a moving piece for me with strong feelings attatched.
I am also very glad that you have a new family who has you.
A blessing.
:D

[Thea]

A very wonderful poem...
You've written it well...
A fine piece...
:)))