Midnight Rain

A little something i wrote in biology class.

It was the middle of the night and the sound of the rain woke me from my sleep. I got out of bed and opened the window. As i opened it, the rain started to meet my face, as the drops bounced off the window sill. I closed the window, grabbed my rain boots and hurried outside. As i opened the door, i saw what seemed like a curtain of raindrops falling off the roof top. I put on my rain boots and stopped in front of the rain curtain. 3...2...1 GO! I said to myself. I burst through the rain and ran over to the covering under the trees. I watched and listened to the music of the water drops. In the light of the moon it looked as if glitter was raining down from the heavens. I ran to the street where there were puddles all around. I hesitated for a moment, then jumped into one. I felt like a little kid again. After jumping a little while more, i walked back up to the door. I turned back to take one more glance at the sparkling rain, then walked inside.

Reviews

[TheKaylaPup]

seems someone is a bit distracted in class. beautiful little scene here. i still like to play in the rain, especially i like to play in the rain after youth group when there is a thunder storm, its great. me and some of my friend will run around, jumping in puddles, and shooting songs of praise toward the heavens.

and Sophie, not necessarily, i've seen it rain where the sun is shinning brite as ever, the same thing could happen with the moon, i've seen much stranger weather.

[emma]

wonderful. i loved it!

[Annie]

This is great! It was fun to read; you have a real talent for writing short but interesting writing. :) Well done! :D

[Break The Broken]

i loved it it mademe smile, it was beautifully written, i love then inoccence in it as well, keep it up! C:

[EdwardBlue]

Promise me young lady that when you are 50 years old you can still write this. Forever
Silly ,playing , child, catching fireflies , holding hands , sitting in trees.
I love your way! Write , write ,write....

Great job

[Wolfwind]

A wonderful moment in time captured in your ink. Much enjoyed!

Aaron

[Sashalee]

aww a really sweet poem :)

[Lesley]

Keep writing!

[Walk away slow poet]

You are really good at these writes, such feeling in this write that had me holding on. Nice write!

[∂αʌ<..]

yes! too good! this is completely me! lol!
you should watch me when it rains...im practically jumping up and down! lol

fabulous short story! ^^ i love it!

[paparapapa]

You just described a really simple scene but in a captivating way. I loved how you described the rain as if it were the most beautiful thing during that time. Short, simple and beautiful. Good job.