Midnight Rain

A little something i wrote in biology class.

It was the middle of the night and the sound of the rain woke me from my sleep. I got out of bed and opened the window. As i opened it, the rain started to meet my face, as the drops bounced off the window sill. I closed the window, grabbed my rain boots and hurried outside. As i opened the door, i saw what seemed like a curtain of raindrops falling off the roof top. I put on my rain boots and stopped in front of the rain curtain. 3...2...1 GO! I said to myself. I burst through the rain and ran over to the covering under the trees. I watched and listened to the music of the water drops. In the light of the moon it looked as if glitter was raining down from the heavens. I ran to the street where there were puddles all around. I hesitated for a moment, then jumped into one. I felt like a little kid again. After jumping a little while more, i walked back up to the door. I turned back to take one more glance at the sparkling rain, then walked inside.

Reviews

[TheKaylaPup]

seems someone is a bit distracted in class. beautiful little scene here. i still like to play in the rain, especially i like to play in the rain after youth group when there is a thunder storm, its great. me and some of my friend will run around, jumping in puddles, and shooting songs of praise toward the heavens.

and Sophie, not necessarily, i've seen it rain where the sun is shinning brite as ever, the same thing could happen with the moon, i've seen much stranger weather.

[*** Hey Jude***]

Very nice visuals. I love the rain as well. Any storm for that matter, but as you mention to experience the rain is to experience creations verve around us! Great write! ~ Jude :-)

[Dove]

Unique and Awesome!!, which is a great combination.

[Michael of Gilead]

I must hesitantly agree with Sophie, however street lights would suffice ;)

[KAREN]

I can picture myself as a child playing in the rain after reading this fun little story.

[Sophie]

Really good, I loved it, just one thing,if it was raining, the clouds would be covering the moon...

[Farzin]

nice..

[Nihilum]

Pretty

[Hachamecha]

I like:)
*Me
"OMG PUDDLES!!!! *jump*