Lost

I am so lost and just want to be found. I feel like a lonely, scared and unloved hound.

 I know that there's someone out there for me. I'm wearing my lock, now who has my key?

I'm so sick and tired of the lonesome wait. Why cant there be a fast forward button on fate?

 I walk around and see the girls and guys. Together with The smiles on their faces and the love in their eyes.

I long for that again so very badly. But i can't seem to find the one sadly.

I will keep searching for the one who is mine. The one for me that is meant to finish my beautiful rhyme.

Reviews

[bookworm]

We all experience what it is you're describing here. I have felt it so often in my life. And I recall specifically feeling it at your age. I felt so alone and scared that no one understood what I was feeling. But take comfort in knowing that we all do, but folks don't run around screaming it from the rooftops bc we're so afraid of admitting our vulnerabilites. We're afraid that it makes us too different and that others can't relate. I find writing about it trememdously helpful and its such a good idea to surround yourself in a community of people who are willing to share their hurt, pain and loneliness with you. I hope you continue to share your thoughts with us. Thank you.

[KittyStarr1101]

I love this writing. I can feel the emotion and all the hidden meaning begging to be let out. Good Job.

[Break The Broken]

i loved thepart about how your wearing the lock now who has the key , great job! c:

[Muse]

I long for that again so very badly. But i can't seem to find the one sadly.

You have a beautiful gift. I see the beauty in the pain that you penn.

[raindroplove]

i know how you feel.....

[emma]

really relatable. i felt a total connection to each of these words and i know exactly what its like to feel this way. really great job!

[paparapapa]

Just edit the formatting a little, so the rhymes would stand out. Other than that, this poem is really beautiful. The rhymes were just right. It flowed smoothly while I was reading it. Good job. ;)

[13ReasonsWhy]

Wow. So beautiful. Powerful his is amazin. I can tally relate. Diffenatly in my library!

[kaylynnmelody♥]

searching for love can be the hardest thing we all have to do. we all want to be loved and we all want that storybook ending but to get the storybook we go through Hell and back. i hope you are successful in your journey for love. =]